Any Hip-Hop/Rap listeners?

[Lunatic]

I just dropped an official video for a track off my mixtape "Living In Reality."
Also dropped my first mixtape which I am excited about! I rap about pain, struggle so its real music! Not mainstream radio stuff. If anybody is interested in seeing my video, I promise you'll enjoy it!



Mixtape link:
http://www.datpiff.com/Lunatic-Livin...pe.336677.html

Thanks, I appreciate any feedback!

[OffseT]

Sounds decent man good luck! btw hip-hop/rap isn't about pain and struggle, nor is real music. Good luck in your career!

[driyac]

Good track bro, I know it's your baby but the track could benefit from a few things.

You need a mid range beat, you have the bass and the highs but the mid range needs something to pop.

Lose the auto tune at the beginning.

By the Way the tone of your vice is unique. I like it a lot kind of a mix between kid ink and raspy ness of Wayne.

I love rap and hip hop but because of the beats and how the track is performed.

[SirMike]

Originally Posted by driyac

Good track bro, I know it's your baby but the track could benefit from a few things.

You need a mid range beat, you have the bass and the highs but the mid range needs something to pop.

Lose the auto tune at the beginning.

By the Way the tone of your vice is unique. I like it a lot kind of a mix between kid ink and raspy ness of Wayne.

I love rap and hip hop but because of the beats and how the track is performed.

Good luck. Good track, and good video.

[austinjames]

sweet man, thats badass. But i agree with the other comment drop that auto tune and the track is golden. Keep up the great work

[bmorecam]

not bad...did you do the production yourself? I actually like the beat. I majored in audio engineering and was really heavy into production and was actually signed to a local label and had my own production label at once but let everything go once my fiance and kids come along. I heard thousands of music and I have to admit your sound desent. the only problem with getting into this field is money. you will most likely go broke doing this until you can actually get a deal, but what are the chance of that these days unless you drive a camaro with 30" wheels and went to jail for drugs or shooting someone lol.

on a serious note...not bad bro..keep doing your thing regardless of what anyone say.

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[GunnyG]

Good luck bro. Nice track and video. I'd have to agree, the auto tune is a bit dated. You could be the next to blow from NC, like Phonte and Big Pooh - Little Brother. Good luck.

[Lunatic]

Originally Posted by bmorecam

not bad...did you do the production yourself? I actually like the beat. I majored in audio engineering and was really heavy into production and was actually signed to a local label and had my own production label at once but let everything go once my fiance and kids come along. I heard thousands of music and I have to admit your sound desent. the only problem with getting into this field is money. you will most likely go broke doing this until you can actually get a deal, but what are the chance of that these days unless you drive a camaro with 30" wheels and went to jail for drugs or shooting someone lol.

on a serious note...not bad bro..keep doing your thing regardless of what anyone say.

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I did the production on my vocals myself, I'm no pro by any means. Thanks for the feedback.

btw I hate any car with over sized rims lol.

[Lunatic]

Thank you everybody for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated. Check out the mixtape if you're interested in hearing more.

[SnoopyAce7]

yeah man, your vocals are straight...don't ruin it with the auto-tune. That sh!ts dead!