Print advertisement for the Camaro that I did for my program.. - Camaro5 Chevy Camaro Forum / Camaro ZL1, SS and V6 Forums

CamK18 · 11-19-2009, 12:45 PM

Our task was to pick any product we wanted, and make a create brief for an advertising campaign so I picked the Camaro. The problem i stated was i believed there was a potential for more market share in the "new-age muscle car category" and that the competition was believed to be better by some of the target market. It was a 9 page report about the target audience/product profile but here is the final print advertisement I submitted to be marked.

Let me know what you guys think!

2010 SSRS · 11-19-2009, 12:49 PM

I like it, looks like my Camaro

Orange5thGen · 11-19-2009, 01:24 PM

Looks great

Iwantone2 · 11-19-2009, 01:53 PM

Looks good to me, it should be marked pretty high!!!

nUcLeArEnVoY · 11-19-2009, 01:57 PM

It's awesome, dude, but you have a grammar error on the first line on the bottom paragraph. It should be 'its' without an apostrophe since it's possessive. "It's" with an apostrophe is used when describing something.

Sorry to be this guy, but the rest of the ad is quite professional looking. I don't think it should be offset by a grammar error.

*KILLER74Z28* · 11-19-2009, 02:14 PM

Nicely done, I like it...

Have you turned it in yet? Looks like you may have forgot the comma after torque?

Iwantone2 · 11-19-2009, 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nUcLeArEnVoY

It's awesome, dude, but you have a grammar error on the first line on the bottom paragraph. It should be 'its' without an apostrophe since it's possessive. "It's" with an apostrophe is used when describing something.

Sorry to be this guy, but the rest of the ad is quite professional looking. I don't think it should be offset by a grammar error.

Good catch on that one!

Quote:

Originally Posted by KILLER74Z28

Nicely done, I like it...

Have you turned it in yet? Looks like you may have forgot the comma after torque?

I heard conflicting things on the comma use as well. My college writing professor said yes, to use it. My Business writing professor said that you did not have to.

TJ91 · 11-19-2009, 02:58 PM

i like it! Those darker rims look nice. I still like how mine turned out

SZOTSTA24 · 11-19-2009, 11:50 PM

nice job

bolteon593 · 11-20-2009, 01:03 PM

you dont do advertising, do you....

Tactical Z · 11-20-2009, 01:08 PM

That car looks...awesome!

Great job!

CamK18 · 11-20-2009, 01:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bolteon593

you dont do advertising, do you....

First project for my advertising class in college. If you dont like it, you can eat it.

Darth_Emma · 11-20-2009, 02:12 PM

A+ (I'm a college professor)

Scrapppy666 · 11-20-2009, 02:33 PM

Design wise it's pretty strong but the message isn't really selling it in my opinion..... a catchy short one liner at the top, something like "The Beauty of the Beast"

the body copy text is ok but personally I'd leave out Mustang and Challenger all together, "competition" is strong enough and leaves the customer feeling like they have a true prize piece that has unique stature, not just because it's better than a mustang and a challenger... let them decide the competition....

just offering my friendly opinion

<< Have a degree in Visual Communication and working on degree for Animation...

11-19-2009, 12:45 PM	#1
CamK18 Drives: 2010 1LT Vic Red Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Cambridge, Ontario Posts: 159	Print advertisement for the Camaro that I did for my program.. Our task was to pick any product we wanted, and make a create brief for an advertising campaign so I picked the Camaro. The problem i stated was i believed there was a potential for more market share in the "new-age muscle car category" and that the competition was believed to be better by some of the target market. It was a 9 page report about the target audience/product profile but here is the final print advertisement I submitted to be marked. Let me know what you guys think! __________________

11-19-2009, 01:53 PM	#4
Iwantone2 Voice Of The Voiceless Drives: CGM 1SS RS Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: OC Cali Posts: 9,617 View My Garage	Looks good to me, it should be marked pretty high!!! __________________

11-19-2009, 02:14 PM	#6
KILLER74Z28 MOD SQUAD Drives: 2G1FT1EW9A9100666 Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: West Michigan Posts: 5,782 View My Garage	Nicely done, I like it... Have you turned it in yet? Looks like you may have forgot the comma after torque? __________________ Who cares about the Blue Oval crowd and their little Ponys? We're getting our Camaro back-and it'll be Supercharged!-MDAII Team LS3

11-20-2009, 02:33 PM	#14
Scrapppy666 Drives: 2010 2SS/RS M6 Black/Black Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Pittsburgh, PA Posts: 1,281 View My Garage	Design wise it's pretty strong but the message isn't really selling it in my opinion..... a catchy short one liner at the top, something like "The Beauty of the Beast" the body copy text is ok but personally I'd leave out Mustang and Challenger all together, "competition" is strong enough and leaves the customer feeling like they have a true prize piece that has unique stature, not just because it's better than a mustang and a challenger... let them decide the competition.... just offering my friendly opinion << Have a degree in Visual Communication and working on degree for Animation... __________________ Pittsburgh Automotive Photography Black on Black 2SS/RS w/ white stripes Dynomax 3" Bullet Catback, CAI Cold Air Intake

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11-19-2009, 12:49 PM	#2
2010 SSRS Drives: 3 V8 Camaros Join Date: May 2009 Location: The Ocean State Posts: 111,187 View My Garage	I like it, looks like my Camaro

11-19-2009, 01:24 PM	#3
Orange5thGen Drives: 2011 Convert Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 2,052 View My Garage	Looks great

11-19-2009, 01:57 PM	#5
nUcLeArEnVoY Oldbie that nobody knows Drives: 2011 1SS/RS M6 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Homestead, FL Posts: 3,459 View My Garage	It's awesome, dude, but you have a grammar error on the first line on the bottom paragraph. It should be 'its' without an apostrophe since it's possessive. "It's" with an apostrophe is used when describing something. Sorry to be this guy, but the rest of the ad is quite professional looking. I don't think it should be offset by a grammar error.

11-19-2009, 02:58 PM	#8
TJ91 :chevy: Drives: 2LT/RS Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 13,033	i like it! Those darker rims look nice. I still like how mine turned out

11-19-2009, 11:50 PM	#9
SZOTSTA24 Drives: Inferno Orange 2010 Camaro 2SS/RS Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: From: Los Angeles Posts: 686	nice job

11-20-2009, 01:03 PM	#10
bolteon593 Drives: 2011 GT500 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: southern california Posts: 902	you dont do advertising, do you....

11-20-2009, 01:08 PM	#11
Tactical Z Banned Drives: Nissan Titan Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: San Antonio, Texas Posts: 8,490	That car looks...awesome! Great job!

11-20-2009, 02:12 PM	#13
Darth_Emma Psssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhh! Drives: under contruction Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Marysville, Ohio Posts: 12,996 View My Garage	A+ (I'm a college professor)