05-13-2009, 10:50 AM | #1 |
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Had to rewrite song over holocaust... Like?
I feel so unsure,
As I take your hand and lead you to crematory, As your body burns... Something in your eyes, Calls to mind a bad memory, And all those sad goodbyes. I’m never gonna be happy again, I’m guilty with no faith, Though it’s easy to pretend, I know you’re dead. I should have tried to save a friend, And waste the chance that I’d been given. So I’m never gonna be happy again, The way I was with you. Time can never mend, The careless whispers of a good friend. To the heart and mind, If your answers kind... There’s no comfort in the truth, Pain is all you’ll find. What am I without you? Tonight living seems so hard, I wish that I could lose the work. Maybe it’s better this way, The work will keep my mind off today. We could have been so good together, We could have made lasted forever... But now, whose gonna give me faith? Please go away. And now it’s never gonna be That way... Now that you’re gone... Now that you’re gone... Now that you’re gone... Was what I did so wrong? So wrong that you had to give up and leave me alone? |
05-13-2009, 10:54 AM | #2 |
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Damn, i'm glad I dont have to write songs..
But good, its really,....rhymful? |
05-13-2009, 11:00 AM | #3 |
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05-13-2009, 02:28 PM | #4 |
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ttt
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05-13-2009, 06:44 PM | #5 |
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it's pretty good but I think i'll stick with the original (well original lyrics anyway)
I got that after the first line
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05-13-2009, 07:34 PM | #7 |
The "Mad Hamster"
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I hoped it was for school and you weren't just going around modifying songs be holocaust themed
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05-13-2009, 08:37 PM | #8 |
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