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I hope this meets your grammar grading book! Sorry I just type fast and dont put things in because Im from the new age of computer users, so please forgive me, plus I'm from New York where everything happens alot quicker. And you can doubt my sources, that's fine, but you don't know me and you don't know my connections in the industry, and I am not trying to sound like an a** but like I said I am not a real consumer, when the GT 500 Shelby came out and everyone was paying at least $5,000-$20,000 over list, I could've had one for a nickel over cost. My vette I bought it at memo. So there are things i know alot faster than the normal person and call me stupid but my source works for GM not a dealership, so you can call me stupid for believing what he said, but I talked to him again last night and got the low down, and I'm not saying anything about it but I just hope your not actually believing this car will be out late 2008 to early 2009 just so you can save for one and pay over list, because it isn't. But look at it this way when it does come out if you were saving for then by that time you can get one for at least sticker, when the car isn't as hot on the market!

But thank oyu for the english leson i hope you enjoyed mine on the benefits of knowing people and not relying on a magazine to tell you what you want to know.