I like the cut back and forth idea. Sometimes, when they only cut once, it's hard to tell that the cars are supposed to represent the animals. It's almost like they just jumped to a whole different thing. It sounds like a fairly long commercial though. I like the ending, it'd be nice to see an exhausted horse galloping up from the distance.
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Originally Posted by fastball
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