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Drives: 1967 Camaro RS350, 2011 Camaro 1SS Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Indianapolis, IN
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I'm working on a little video of my 2011 Camaro and my father's 67 Camaro. Constructive criticism welcome! This is obviously just the teaser.
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Not a bad video, I like it!
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nice vid
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Drives: nothing Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: a hole
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That's pretty cool.
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that works
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the video itself wiggles too much. (i dk if it is intentional or not, but definitely drags me out of the moment when watching it)
there are some weird shots: 0:07-0:10 is kind of "meh". Then the next after it when you focus about 5 seconds on the tire, feels too long. (like, c'mon man it's just a regular tire )and for example 0:19-0:21 when you pan from one car no another. Framing is just not right, doesn't look sleek you know. :P Spend some more time trying to figure some things out. Other than that it looks promising! P.S. and PLEASE, NEVER ZOOM IN/OUT to imitate dolly movement.
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i liked it
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Looking good so far!
One thing that I noticed is just that the video is shaky, a tripod may be a good investment if you plan to continue making videos, other than that I thought it was pretty good! |
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The last part when you were holding the brake and spinning the tires directly in front of the '67 scared me (what if...
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I would hope he has the line lock lol I was thinking the same thing though haha
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Cool video!!
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cool!
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Drives: 1967 Camaro RS350, 2011 Camaro 1SS Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Indianapolis, IN
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That is a damn good video man, I liked it a real lot, I love the end with the tires spinning
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